This is the original 

I like that there is more than one thing going on in this photo and i love the animals in the background. The lighting is dull and there isn't many bright colour in this photograph.

Obvious mistakes

•There's not much colour that stands out in the picture

•Unwanted parts of the background

   

Corrections

•I have added 200% saturation to brighten up the photograph.

•I have cropped the unwanted bit of the photo like the metal pole and the half taken flower rack by the end of the picture on the right